trying to turn tao te ching dao de jing thing 1 into sonnet

[jodawi]

A path that's walked is no eternal Path,
A name that's spoken no eternal Name.
The universes from the Nameless came;
From womb of Named, the amniotic bath
gives rise to ___ ___ ____ __ ____ ___ ___
...

were thinking abba bccb cddc ee or abba cddc effe gg,
but google google o shaking spear used abab cdcd efef gg.
not that i usually care what shaking spear did, since
i prefer the prejudge against shaking spear writings,
yet nevertheless this sentence form must end here

well, maybe to continue in shaking fruitbat scheme,
unless can't think of wordments propohr, in which
case to switch to italiananana or shaking spear
or shaking spaghetti fruitbat jubilee.


as you were.